The Official Writing Challenge
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Love it! A simply engaging story.
You have told this gripping story extremely well and painting the character of your MC very well indeed. He and the story are very believable. This could easily be a winner!
Loved the slow pace of this tale.
This is an example of great story telling with vivid details bringing it to life.
Great script for a movie.

It is a good example of someone really looking at the simplicity in Christ and how worldliness could clutter up one's life.

I am so thankful that God has supplied me with so many blessings. I pray every day that nothing will ever be more important than Him.

God bless.
You did a brilliant job of building a great character. I found myself totally invested and enjoyed the ending. You did a great job with a fresh take on the topic.
Creative and special.

Well done.

God bless~
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
Many congratulations on your win for this excellent story.
I love all the little details. Superb writing. Congratulations on your worthy win!
Very well done! Congratulations on your win!
Congratulations. Wonderful story.
This story rings true. Working with homeless men over the last decade, I've come into contact with your MC's internal dilemma quite often. Many of them are content to live a carefree, responsibility free life. And money has a tendency to bring responsibility. Your ending was brilliant, and also gives the reader a peek into the camaraderie between homeless people as well as their charitable nature. I find them to be more charitable than many rich people.

Well earned win! Congrats!

God bless~
Your MC's struggle was tangible and made your story so poignant and believable. Well done and congratulations!
Congratulations, Ann, on this winning entry. I thought it might be a winner and I was right! It's a very well deserved win.