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07/18/14
Absolutely hilarious! And the ending was a nice calming touch in the midst of the mayhem!
07/19/14
This is absolutely hysterical. There are so many nice touches, from the bus stopping the motorcycle, to the police officer yelling "encouragement" as our hero speeds off after the thief.

And it is so on topic, too, as your MC's perspective and reality truly are day and night from each other.

Great job!
07/22/14
Love your sense of humor in this well-written story! This was fun to read. Great job!
07/22/14
This was sick! I mean that in a funny way. Your imagination rivals Stephan King's.

Great job of entertaining us. It was a breath of fresh air. Sometimes I feel that we all are too serious sometimes. A little humor goes a long way.

God Bless.
Oh I love this. What a hoot! You had me seriously laughing at each line. This is an all time favorite. Other than the line different as night from day, I didn't see the topic immersed throughout the story, but I don't care because this is sheer genius. I don't like to guess how a piece will do with the judges, but I will say this is the top in my book. Oh, I love your MC. The serendipitous storyline, though outrageous, somehow feels quite realistic. I think you have the beginning of a number one sitcom... If you can just convince the networks. Love, love, love it.
07/23/14
Madcap fun! Like the old screwball comedies of the 30's!

Well done.

God bless~
This story is pure delight --from the antics to the irony. --Made me laugh!
This was a big favorite with me!