The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the imagery!!
07/17/14
Beautiful.
07/18/14
Lovely in its visual imagery and uplifting in its tone. Well done!
07/18/14
Your use of language is masterful here. I felt myself drawn into the poetry on a deeper and deeper level the further I read. That doesn't usually happen for me.

There was a profoundness about this piece that left me quietly thinking afterwards.

Thanks for sharing it with us.
07/19/14
Oooh, every word exquisite. I love it to bits!
07/19/14
This is beautiful and a creative idea for the topic. I love your imagery. Great job!
07/19/14
Great ABCB. Beautifully written with good flow and rhyme. Well done, poet.
SO Beautiful! A wonderful poem filled with exquisite descriptions - day carries satchels of light - just great! Love the title too.
07/19/14
Incredibly well done. Great message and wonderful use of this week's topic. Beautiful.
07/21/14
Beautiful and very well done. Good job:)
07/21/14
Your poetry is always a delight and you have an excellent command of words.

Blessings.
07/21/14
I'm sure it's a bit cliche but this was truly poetry in motion!
I would love to see this in an illustrated book. It is so beautiful, so well written, and I wish I could write like you!
07/22/14
This is the kind of poetry that the reader loves to explore. It satisfies and delights the creative cravings of the soul. :) I'm in love with your metaphor, "her emissary, Dawn" and phrases like "satchels filled with light," "overseer of clouds" and "Night's immense bouquet." I hope this does very well. It deserves to be read and appreciated by many. <3
The personification of Day and Night is sheer poetry. I envy your beautiful placement of each word. What a beautiful piece of art you have created.
07/22/14
Breathtakingly beautiful!

God bless~
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
07/24/14
Congrats!

God bless~
07/26/14
Congratulations, Verna, on your well deserved EC place.