The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/14
Well done
I liked your poem very much. it flowed well and read easily.
Poetry is quite an art in itself, but you did good. Liked the short sentences.
God bless you.
06/14/14
I am not into rap, hip hop or many of the current music styles... but I could see a Christian rapper do this... and it would "represent" well.
06/14/14
I am not into rap, hip hop or many of the current music styles... but I could see a Christian rapper do this... and it would "represent" well.
06/14/14
Perfect for a Christian rap song! I love the rhythm and flow and the message is awesome. Great writing here.
to make a smile
your default style.

Made me smile.

They really should add a 'like' button.
06/15/14
Yes, loved this! A great rappin song, sure to find some Christian rapper to do this!
Stunning! Delightful and most definitely musical . . .
06/16/14
You know what? I didn't like this when I first read it. I missed the whole "rap" theme of it, though. When I read the comments at the bottom, all talking about it as a rap song, I went back to the top, noticed for the first time what the title was, and then I re-read it, using a rap cadence - and it was fantastic. I could easily hear Lecrae or Trip Lee doing this...it totally fits their pace and style.

So, now I love it. Great job!
06/16/14
Beautiful.
Impactful.
Powerful.

I loved it as a rap song. I loved it as a poem. It doesn't matter what style, or even what it's called... the words are what brings it home.

WEll done! Excellent work!

God bless~
06/17/14
I really enjoyed this.

The ability and agility of bouncebackabilty is right on.

Blessings.
06/18/14
I'm rapt.
Great job
06/19/14
Congratulations!

God Bless~
06/19/14
Congratulations on your placing. Well done.
06/20/14
I'm bouncing to the rhythm. I think the title is great too!
I've never liked rap but after reading this I have changed my mind. You captured the beat and the words are powerful. It read so easily. Congratulations on your win.
06/21/14
I could hear this being "rapped" as I read. I love your creativity. You've used excellent words and made this a powerful poem. Congrats on your EC!