The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/14
I like it!

My favorite part is the carefully chosen purple skin with yellow polka dots/
06/14/14
I got a laugh from this one... amazed at the concept that the God of the universe has children on other planets... but we never know, do we?
Charming. I love this . . .
06/16/14
I loved this. Especially how you misled me into believing that it was an earthling about to descend to the surface of an alien planet. But, no, it was the other way around!

Great job!
06/16/14
An amazing tale that was interesting and an altogether enjoyable read.

You have quite the imagination, but then that's what writing is all about eh?

Well done.

God bless~
06/17/14
An interesting twist that took me by surprise; I wondered where these earthlings had landed.

Blessings.
06/18/14
I'm sure their news headline read, "Zorque Mars the Earth Landing - InJupiterbly!"
I loved Gary Larson's dislocated world view as well, so this was a fun read for me. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 14th overall! Happy Dance!