The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/14
This was a beautiful and enjoyable read. I love stories that make me feel good at the end.

I could read stories like this all day long. There are enough harsh things going on in the "real world" - - when I read, I like to forget and feel good and this story did just that!

Nicely done. Thank you.

God bless~
05/31/14
Good, descriptive writing. That plane trip felt all too familiar!
If you're looking for red ink, perhaps the plot might have had a little more intrigue.
A well constructed piece, introducing the bestie as you did and, like CD, I'm a sucker for happy endings.
This was a delightful read. How often in life do we expect sadness or let the past overcome us, only to find out Jesus has a wonderful twist for us. That's just what your story did--started out with palpable sadness that I could so relate to, then turned into a wonderful surprise, just like I know Jesus has planned for me around my next corner. This was pure delight. Congratulations on ranking 15th overall. Happy Dance!