The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/14
This is a fun, well-written story. You had me wanting to see what would could go wrong next. Great job!
05/11/14
Smiling and loving your story! Well done.

God bless~
05/11/14
This was fun to read. It kept me on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what happens next - the fact that it was all a practice run, was a pleasant surprise. The voice of each of your characters was very distinct.

Great job!
05/13/14
Funny. That poor new daddy:)
A young Dick Van Dike, a younger Jerry Lewis, even Jim Carrey would carry this off marvelously! You rascal. How can you expect me to continue blathering in the Challenge, when it is perfectly obvious this will not only catch the judges' eyes, but spin them into convulsions>

btw - I LOVE it!
Oh I enjoyed this. I love a good twist and didn't see it coming at all. You painted so many pictures for me that had me chuckling from beginning to end. Outstanding job.
05/14/14
I've been out of the loop for a bit so your entry was a delight as well as a kick in the behind of what I have been missing. Brilliant, creative writing!
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall! Happy Dance!
This is a winner in my heart!