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04/12/14
This is a good portrayal of the topic without knocking us over the head with it. I could feel the strain of the young bride.

I think I would have done some of the punctuation different.

I enjoyed the sweet read. ;)
04/12/14
What a wonderfully sweet story of a man leading his wife from the land of worries. This was lovely.
04/13/14
As I read your story it was as if I was the overly anxious bride. The words that really touched me, because these are part of my daily reality. Specifically:

I closed my eyes and leaned into him.

He bolstered me with words of courage and comfort.

Thank you. I whispered into his shirtfront.

Thank you for this story that touched me personally. Well done.
04/14/14
Sweet and lovely story. I could read stories like this all day long!

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!!