The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/14
I had to read through this twice to grasp the imagery.

I actually feel forewarned not to chillax too much, lest I stumble into enchanted ground.

Well written. Loved it enough to go back and read it a third time. :)



04/13/14
I felt like I'd stumbled across a long lost Lewis Carroll poem. I was mesmerized by its pace and the imagery. I felt as though I was on enchanted ground. You did a fantastic job of luring me in and carrying me on your words and phrases at a pace that was both fast and slow.

Great job!
04/13/14
Fabulous imagery and on point rhythm. Fantastic poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
04/14/14
Beautiful...felt like I was reading a page from the "literary giants" at a library from days gone by!

Lovely.

God bless~
04/14/14
oooh so weighty while yet gentle and lovely a reminder to be always ready with our armor.

The battle rages on even while we sleep.

Congratulations on your EC for this absolutely lovely poem!
04/17/14
Congrats Margaret!

God bless~
04/25/14
I always love to "chillax" in your poetry. You are gifted with creating emotion, images, mystery and cadence. This reader LOVES what you accomplish. Many congrats on your Editor's Choice award! <3