The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I adored this! Your descriptions clearly evoked the pictures you wrote of. It felt like I was hearing you tell me this story firsthand. I loved it beginning to end!
Great job! Loved it!

God bless~
This is an incredible piece of storytelling. Your masterful use of language, and your meticulous conjuring of emotions, put your talent on display front and center.

Excellent job!
This piece took me on a wonderful voyage through memories of childhood. So easily relatable for all who've known the awesome splendor and peace of God's great outdoors. I just might go fishing today. Your bridges to the present worked well. And you really brought it home with the message to make a good ending. Congratulations!!
Congratulations on your EC!
I love the ending of this story . . . not spelling everything out, but leaving enough for the reader to understand.
I love this story. Welcome back to the challenges, Mari! <3 <3
Good job, Marita, and congratulations on this delightful story. God bless.
This story completely draws the reader in. I love the recurring "red stripe" theme, even with the verse from Isaiah. Super work! Many congrats on your Editor's Choice award!