The Official Writing Challenge
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Are you a voluntary Treasurer? Ouch! Beautifully painted. God bless you.
Something we all should consider.

I added some "bumps" in the lines to make them more rhythmical but that did not ruin the thoughts.

I am thankful that Peter told us how to take care of our sin by being baptized for the forgiveness of them so we could be given God's Holy Spirit to live within us to guide our lives.

Your story is a good wake up call if we haven't obeyed Jesus yet.

God bless~
Your powerful message comes across loud and clear in these rhythmic verses. Good job!
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