The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/14
Simple, clever and oh so true of those who like to talk the walk on painful issues. Well done.
01/18/14
Wow, this is awesome. Imagine a rich man doing this. It's a good idea, though.

Very well written with perfect rhyme and meter. Great Job!
01/18/14
I enjoyed the irony of this well written poem.
01/18/14
Simple but superb poem. I too love the irony. Great job!
01/18/14
Claps and applause, whoops and hollas... Very well done! The ryhmes are superb and the meaning clear. This should be published in a book somewhere.
01/18/14
Creative and well-rhymed...
perhaps a little short on the topic. But my opinion might be "out-judged." :-)

Forget the caviar. How can one live without "olive-laden sauces?" :-)...among my favorite lines, btw.

01/19/14
Wow! Such a clever and tightly crafted work ... simply rang with its slightly satirical tone and street-wise rhythm

Loved it!
Sardonic and delicious! Do not stop poetizing!
Very enjoyable read. Great job.
01/21/14
Enjoyed your poem, it was an enjoyable read and perfect to fit the current topic too:'Making Ends Meet'.
01/22/14
Wow! Very powerful in its simplicity! Great job!
Good job! Interesting take on the topic. Congratulations!
Very enjoyable! Well deserved EC selection. Reminds me of some short term missionaries. I would love you to have a go at writing about the professor at a Christian college I heard about who decided to be an atheist for a year.