The Official Writing Challenge
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Just lovely. A wonderful poem of truth.
This is stunning from beginning to end (and with perfect meter throughout). First there is the rose, with it's temporal nature, and the MC trying to hold it tight despite the thorns. The sensory images of sight, smell, and pain transcended across your writing to this reader. Then your contrast with Eternal God and our uncomprehendable-ness of Him was so eloquently worded. Your ending is just "Wow!" Love this!
Your title is given vision powerfully and beautifully in this wonderfully done poem!
Congratulations on ranking 14 in your level and 15 overall.