The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/13
This is top-notch in everything. Your meter grabs hold of the reader as the words dance off the tongue. I love your internal rhyme (especially all the words that rhyme with ax, and then there's woo and coo. You're masterfully crafted this together with all the allusions to Scripture. FYI -- I went back for a 3rd and 4th read on this. ;) Supurb!
11/24/13
Brilliant!

God bless~
Absolutely wonderful. Like Beth, I have read this a few times and it gets better each time! A very powerful reminder of the pursuit of the Hound of Heaven and the power of the double-edged sweord - whoops, axe!
11/29/13
Congrats! God bless~
11/30/13
Congratulations on your EC win with this superb poem.