The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this well written descriptive piece. I had friends who were Baptist growing up, your description was everything I remember when I visited their church.

Great job.

God bless~
Your words painted so many pictures in my mind of this "revival" in a less than civilized setting. Your MC fit the topic perfectly. Thanks for reminding us that worship/praise doesn't have to fit our conventional molds. God is pleased with all kinds of sincere outpouring of love to Him.
Just a quick note:

I just re-read my comment and it appeared (to me) to be "harsh" and almost "judging" which was not my intent! We are all Christians, no matter which church we attend.

I just was complimenting the writer/author of how detailed the description was, and so that was what I meant by my comment.

Again, loved your story!

God bless~
The clarity of your descriptions made this an enjoyable read. Well done.
Well, I can't say I enjoyed this. It made me realize how much being comfortable means to me. The Bible never promises comfort, just blessings when we obey. Good for you!
fantastic! Loved the description and especially the strange images, like tug of war.
Congratulations! God Bless~
Amazing and compelling story! Excellent! Congrats on your EC.
A great recounting of your experience in Uganda and well deserving of its EC placement. I really enjoyed this moving account. While I haven't been to Uganda I've heard others,who have been, share similar stories. Great writing.
Great story, Jack! I love it. Congratulations on your placement!
I am overwhelmed by your vivid portrayal of this life changing experience Jack-Thank you for sharing this with us!