The Official Writing Challenge
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There are so many thoughts racing through my head with this story. It held my attention, made me think...and gave me pause to reflect. It could be interpreted so many ways, but overall it was quite a brilliant piece.

Nicely done.

God bless~
Very clever! We can read Acts 5 for the rest of the story. :) Their actions were chilling, just as their counterparts in the book of Acts. Great work here!
Very well written. Excellent job of bringing out the imaginative story behind the known story. Good character sketch.
Congratulations on placing 22 overall!