The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/13
What an intriguing story (true I presume). You've told it really well. Amazing that the cat lived thought that, and that the snake disappeared as though defeated. Great writing.
10/20/13
Should have written 'though' not 'thought'.
10/20/13
'through that' - I can't believe I corrected my mistake with another mistake. Sorry to take up reviewing space!
10/21/13
Amazing story...Fantastic descriptive piece! This sounded like it was being narrated and I was watching the story unfold...excellent job.

I feel sorry for the cat. I hope this isn't a true story, but if so...I'm glad the cat managed to survive such an encounter.

Thanks for this riveting and compelling piece.

God bless~
Congratulations on placing 19 overall!