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This was an interesting and thought provoking read. I liked the "open-ended" conclusion. Nicely done.

God bless~
I enjoyed the colorful dialogue.

The open ended conclusion left me somewhat mystified.

I like the way that almost the entire store is told using dialogue.
Nicely told with a believable aura. The MC is a work in process and the conclusion reflects that. Well done
Interesting story. They were all willing to give him another chance, but the ending left me wondering what would happen next. If this is the beginning of a book, I would love to read the next chapter.

Very emtionally engaging. I wonder if any were praying for him? A loner remains a loner if he feels there is no one on his side . . .