The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the ending especially - but the rest too. Great descriptions. You absolutely put me there.
Wow! Powerful story with amazing details that jumped from the page into the reader's mind. Excellent job, and super prolific ending.

God bless~
Wow! I can't even think of any other word. Wow! I had tears in my eyes. This is a masterpiece and my favorite this week. Congratulations for ranking 9th your level and 18th overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)