The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
WOW - I loved this. It touched my heart. It was so inspiring from beginning to end, and the reference to singing and dancing in "heavenly language" as the living waters flowed, fully embraced me.

Beautiful! Thank you.

God bless~
08/23/13
This is a beautiful entry. I loved it.
08/29/13
Congrats Linda!

God bless~
08/29/13
Congratulations, Linda! beautiful and well deserving of 1st place. Congratulations!
Oh wow how beautiful! Congratulations and a Happy Dance for you!
Oh and I meant to say that I always say that Heaven will smell like sheets fresh from the line. It doesn't matter how sick I am there is something about line-fresh sheets that make me feel better and now I know why--the feel of Clean! God's gift to me!
08/29/13
Congrats on your 1st place win in the Masters and your first place EC! This was masterful!
08/29/13
Wow, you did great with this. A fantastic piece of poetic prose! Congratulations!
08/29/13
Linda, your talent with words leaves me speechless. This piece is truly inspired. A very well deserved 1st place win. Congratulations.
Beautiful words and message. Congratulations on being #1.
08/29/13
This one leaps out of the screen and into our hearts, so it's only right that it should sit at the top of the heap. Well done, and congratulations on your win.
08/29/13
"The parched, cracked lips of the dirt."

Among my favorite lines in a masterful poem. Congratulations!
08/29/13
Beautifully scripted words with a wonderfully inspiring message. No surprise this took first place. Many congrats!
08/29/13
Stunning in what initially appeared to be simplicity yet grew into profundity. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
08/29/13
Congratulations Linda! Your poem is beautiful. I love the imagery - the rain, the dancing breeze likened to the Holy Spirit. A well-deserved 1st place.
08/29/13
1st PLACE! Yay! *shaking my head in awe* It just comes out of you so naturally.
Love this poem! I work in recovery and there is always talk of becoming "clean"...this would be a perfect devotional for recovery groups.

The repetition of the last line serves to reinforce the strength of the insight you are sharing.

This is my first ever FaithWriters review, but I just had to add my comment of how much I enjoyed reading this.