The Official Writing Challenge
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That's a great story. Well told. It took you less than 700 words to get me anxious to know what happens to Addy!
Sort of felt like I was watching an episode of “Little House on the Prairie” reading this! Great detail and wonderful, heartwarming story to message the topic! Enjoyed!
What an entertaining read. It was like an old fashioned book of yesteryear. Good job, and totally on topic.

Thank you. God bless~
Congratulations Leola on a well deserved EC!

God Bless~
Your story was totally endearing. It was like the old 'feel good' family shows of the 60's. Great writing. Congratulations on your win.
Congratulations on your EC. I really enjoyed your story told in Addy's voice which was convincing in its turns of phrase and tone. Well done!
I thoroughly enjoyed Addy and this glimpse at a day in her life. Claire reminded me of Nellie from "Little House on the Prairie" which my husband and I watched faithfully with our daughters. Stories/movies set in that time frame have always grabbed my interest. This has all the earmarks of being an engaging novel. Looking forward to reading more of your entries.
Addy is adorable! Her line of thinking and decision to make her Ma smile warmed my heart too. Super congrats on your EC, Leola!