The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This gave me chills. I've been thinking of Jesus being King of Kings, too. I love the mixture of both times of Him being King. Great writing.
Beautifully flowing, wonderfully written. A wonderful testament of our Lord and savior. God bless!
What a beautiful and powerful poem! Its structure and flow is lovely and its message arresting. I can imagine it being performed by two people, two voices, and I hope it is performed!I will enjoy reading it again.
I thought the poem was excellent. Your choice of words and poem structure were of the highest quality. Narrative poems can be very hard to do well - but you do them very well.
One of the most beautiful stories of Christ I have ever read. Perfection is yours in this epic poem, in every way. I truly enjoy your writing and look forward to it each challenge week. A winner for sure.
Your writing seems so effortless despite its incredible potency.
You are a master craftsman and wordsmith.
So beautiful! The words flow so smoothly and pack quite a punch. Very well done.
You packed so much in very few words. Awesome job. I think you hit the topic perfectly!
Beautiful and epic.

Amen...God Bless~
Congratulations on your well deserved my opinion it should have been higher. Truly one of the best poems I have ever read Blessings.....
Congratulations on your HC...This was so beautiful and a winner in my eyes.

God bless~
Congratulations for placing with this magnificent poem.
Great stuff! You penned this poem so well! Congrats on your 4th place EC, the rhymes in this are amazing.
Congratulations, Kenn! God bless!
Yay so happy your beautiful poem placed in the top EC!
Congratulations on your EC, Kenn! (all that worry for nothing)
Congratulations on your 3rd place win which is very well-deserved for this lovely poem.
Magnificent! God-honoring. Thrilling. May I post this on my Facebook page to share? Thank you.

Hugs, Judi

Praise YHWH. Hebrews 10:26-31, Revelation 12:17
Hello, Judi. Certainly you may share this poem; that's why I write 'em. I think you can share on Facebook from here, but you can also visit my website at and "like" it there. And thank you ALL for your kind comments - Glad you enjoyed it!