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I have never seen this awesome event personally, but you made me feel like I was right there seeing it with my own eyes.
Such vivid descriptions made me grateful that all the volcanoes around here are extinct. A very absorbing read.
Great descriptive story kept me from start to finish, very interesting, pulled me right in.

God bless~
Really like your last line, which sums it up, and is so true: Creation trumps the trivial!
The wonders of God's creation never cease to amaze me.
You did a super job of planting the reader at the scenes.
A great read!
"New Heavens and a new Earth" - how exciting it is to be in its formative stages. My camera is at the ready. I love this.
Congratulations Tracy!
Gosh you made me wish we would've made the trek many years ago to see this marvel the one time we were on the island. Wonderfully descriptive and crisp word pictures.