The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a thrilling story. You did a nice job of setting the scene and building the character. I've read so many similar stories like this recently. I think it is a fear that many echo. You did a nice job of weaving the topic throughout the story too.
Eerie, because we know the end is near. We know this scene could be true soon.
Congratulations on placing 10 in your level and 16 overall!