The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very different viewpoint for this story. I've never thought what it must have been like for the boy.
You left hints in this, but I didn't pick up on them. "eye-to-eye, nose-to-nose, mouth-to-mouth" In retrospect, I love it. This is fantastically creative. Your alliteration was super in describing the birds.
Wow! Terrific retelling! Why didn't you "throw a brick" and get more appreciative readers?
Congratulations on ranking 8 in your level and 11 overall!