The Official Writing Challenge
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Great, great story! I was sure I knew where this was going, but it still kept me hooked until I read far enough to learn where it really was going. My only regret is that the word limit restricted you from drawing it out a little more. Everything has to happen too quickly and this needs some time to really savor these great characters you've created. Really nice job!
This is a great story. Your choice of words and the language the characters use adds a lot to the tale. Well done.
You certainly can write an interesting tale. This was so entertaining. Thanks

God bless~