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Indeed all of creation bears reminder of the One we yearn for. I love the vivid images you created...of the stars keeping their holy vigil, moonlight bidding the grieved onward...your piece impelled the longing in my spirit and such a fitting work for this season of Advent.
This touched my heart and blessed me. Perfect entry for this time of the year. I loved it. Thanks.
God bless~
This is one of the most beautiful descriptions of "leaving earth for heaven," that I've ever read. I'm going to put this in my favorites. The word that comes to my mind concerning this is "diaphanous." (fine, translucent, delicate). Absolutely gorgeous, too! Wow!
Oh my goodness, this is none other than breathtaking and beautiful. Your words leave me speechless and in awe.

Absolutely stunning!

It was all excellent but I loved the ending the best.
A very inspiring piece of peoetically writing with a deep meaning and application that applies to us all.

Thanks! Colin Swann (Gold)
Congratulations for ranking 20 overall!