The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I could so relate to this lovely piece. I'm not sure why but this year has gone faster by tons than any other year. I just want to grab hold and slow it down, but there is a wonderful place in Glory waiting for me.
Your format and meter are super and your word choices are perfect. These are topped only by your uplifting and urgent message. This is top-notch writing!
In a word - "beautiful."
Thanks. God bless~
A lovely poem with a great message. My only suggestion would be to omit the extra ? and ! that you have included. But, I really enjoyed it.
This a great poem with its reminder that our biological clock is ticking away to the end. I love your delivery.
An excellent and wonderful poem with such an all-important message. Many congratulations on well deserved EC.
Excellent poem with such an important message! CONGRATULATIONS on your E.C. win! WAY TO WRITE!! :)
Wow another fantastic Time perspective piece-perhaps we should all sit back and ponder 'time'...