The Official Writing Challenge
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Bravo! This is a bit of brilliant writing. From your descriptive names to your tongue in cheek humor you pulled me in immediately and held my attention to the very last word. Splendid job!
I don't think I will ever become irritated again without remembering the truth taught in this story. Really good job of creating a memorable lesson in a captivating style.
Oh, I love this modern take on "The Screwtape Letters." It would fit perfectly. And there are some great reminders here. Nice job!
Just an excellent piece, extraordinary and unique.
I loved it!

God BLess, Lynn
How on earth did you think it up? Brilliant writing!
Very interesting. I enjoyed it throughout and thought you did a great job on the writing.

God bless!
Simply dazzling piece of work!
Your creativity mesmerized me and the lessons sprinkled throughout your piece were truly inspired.
Shades of Screwtape!! This was delightfully written with a sharp, clear message for "the army of light"!! :D I absolutely loved every tiny detail of this clever, clever story!
Very interesting stance on the fiery darts from the darker side. Elements of Screwtape here, with your own unique approach.
CONGRATULATIONS!! I wasn't surprised at all to find this in the winners' circle! WAY TO WRITE!! :)
Nice to see, Melanie. Congratulations on your EC. Keep it up, your work is good to read.