The Official Writing Challenge
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A delightful read. Well done.
I love this piece. It had me chuckling all the way through. I was kind of expecting at the end to learn that the brothers were all grown-up but still used pencils as arrows and squirted whip cream everywhere! Siblings can be a pain for sure but they are (in most cases) the only people in your life who are there from cradle to grave and that can be a beautiful blessing indeed. This was a delightful read and left me with a warm fuzzy feeling inside.
'Sprayed sprinkles from tinkles.' Yes, very brotherly indeed. I enjoyed this comical rhyme and it's message.
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Being the only girl sibling with four brothers, I totally get this, even after many years. I can even see the long-term blessedness of having them, though I still find it hard to admit. lol Good writing.