The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my gosh! This was so powerful. It was swift, yet pulled in perfectly at the conclusion. I loved the masterful descriptions, and the internal dialogue. So clever and so well crafted. Thank you for this. Perhaps it will help someone who is struggling in their life right now.

Nicely done. God bless~
Beautifully written. That last line gave me goosebumps!
Wow--this week's entries were so powerful, and yours is no exception. If these profound stories help just one reader, than praise the Lord.
So powerful, so vivid I could see Robin’s big brown eyes staring! Excellent job on this!
Powerful word-graphics that show how the same scenario can trigger such opposing responses.
Very compelling material.
What a heart-breaking, but in-the-end-hopeful story! Too often either Mark's or Robin's diet is someone's "real life" way to deal with pain. This was very well-written, and I congratulate you on your EC!