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This is a cute story. I like how you drew me in at the beginning. Reminiscing is always fun. Then when I realized it was from the POV of an ant, I smiled. (I almost did my story on that as well, but it wouldn't have compared to this) I was curious how they could have an annual picnic because I didn't think they lived very long. How delighted I was to find those interesting facts at the end so I didn't have to try and google to find my answer. Nice job!
Awww.I enjoyed this so much, including the fabulous info about ants you included.

Thank you for this brilliant entry...kudos for such a clever way of presenting the topic.

God bless~
Very amusing take.I especially liked the line when the tablecloth was shaken and their supper was deposited at their feet.
A fun and unique take on the subject. What says 'picnic' more than ants? I'm afraid I'll have a hard time stepping on them and spraying them after this. Might be Suzy or cousin Vinny. Nice!