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This is an awesome story. I wanted to keep reading to find out what happened next. :)
What an imaginative and thoroughly enjoyable tale. I found it rich with underlying meaning. I love the creative way you told this! Great work!
Creative, gripping and so well written. I simply loved this entire piece.

Thank you. God bless~
Excellent. I want to give you a critique rather than a compliment, but I can't.

Well done.
This is a delightful story. I found myself leaning in and eager to keep reading.

This is just my opinion, but I think the story might have been stronger if you had just told the story of Amos. Perhaps if you had more words to develop the mother, it wouldn't have felt like a rough transition from present to past.
Outstanding story-within-a-story. Gripping, tense tale. Great job seizing, and then keeping, the reader's attention. Write on.
Congratulations for ranking 11th in level four and 12th overall!