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I absolutely loved this whole story...and the twist at the end was perfect!
I adore "feel good" stories.

Thank you. Great job.

God Bless~
Great story!..and you told it well!
Excellent! I loved the flow and the detail and I was right there with that girl in her pantyhose predicament. A feel good ending and a clever title too. Well done!
This was a delightful story. I loved the humor throughout and the twist at the end especially.
Great story. Great title. I was squirming in my seat with the MC as she went through this ordeal. Super ending, too.
A great story! I wanted to tell her, "I hope you never shop there again." I really enjoyed this and the perfect ending.
This was an absolutely delightful story. From when the cashier was referred to as the Hog Calling Queen, to the run in the attorney's stocking at the end of the story was such a smooth-reading story. I see why you are in the Category you write in. Fantastic story!
Such an entertaining story! I love the part at the end with the run in the hose.