The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job with this entry. I kind of knew it was based on a true story, I felt the authenticity throughout the
whole piece. At least you won-no matter what!

Thanks! God Bless~
This is a fun story. However, now that I'm a parent and given the shape the world is in, I think you should march right in there and redo your experiment, right now! Stretch your mind. I really did enjoy the playful feel of this story and can't help but wonder how you would have done in Nationals. Tiny red ink overdue is one word. You did a great job of bringing the topic in on this fun piece. I also really enjoyed your characters.
I also suspected it was a true tale on account of the detail and the voice you used. It held my interest and certainly fit the topic. Nice job.
Congratulations on ranking 19th overall!