The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved your poem. The topic is subtle, but is understood.
The feeling of one being lost in sin and living in our world is real, alive and true.
The good news? God is faithful no matter the darkness one may experience.
Thank you. And, God bless you.

Powerfully written, good message- and the overall contents can be applied to society and our world today.
Nicely done. God Bless~
The Fathers love and commitment is like no other, it continues when others have given up.
Great vision of that in this poem...enjoyed.
An interesting poem that paints a vivid picture of personal hell. Good work.
Love the beat of your poem. Commitment is clearly spoken.

Great Writing!!
Staggering and wonderful. Congratulations on your very well deserved placing. The last verse particular is just wonderful - the earlier verses chilling in their dark truth. Great writing.
Congratulations on a job well done! God Bless~
Very nice piece of writing. Wonderful job and congrats on the 1st place award!
Beautiful, haunting, exquisite work! Super congrats on top honors!
Great thought-provoking verses throughout this deserving blue ribbon winner!
Chillingly powerful! This comment is rather late but ... CONGRATULATIONS! :D
I'm new here so not too sure of all the proper protocol... My friend, I believe I've shared some of the same darkness from whence you came! A very powerful message in this piece - a very striking presentation - especially for those who have been there! Thank you so much for the powerful close... He is the Only One Who can make the difference! AMEN
Rev. L. Anderson