The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever wrap-up for an illuminating and trek through your MC's mind, with very descriptive imagery.
Well done.
This was interesting. Your thoughts are quite profound and really pull up a vivid vision in my head.

I think your weakest area was creativity as I have read several sample blogs and stories where someone is encouraging someone to write a blog.

However your words are inspiring andvery lovely. It is well-written and will strike a chord with many readers.
This was a great entry. It was clever, and unique. I enjoyed the entire "blog."
It was really interesting, and totally on topic.

It held my attention and it concluded in a strong way.
Loved it. Nice job.

God Bless you~
I had to smile at this (and having grown up on a farm can appreciate this) "the whirly-gig farmer" spinning and then taking "stock".

And this I absolutely LOVE this, "a thousand wars or a trillion dollars or winning every race can’t buy a moment of eternity or let you taste the truest taste of love."
Congratulations for ranking 9th in your level and 15th overall!