The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
You constructed a great scene and it was a perfect example of persuasion. I had to reread in a few spots to keep the characters straight but I could picture what was happening very well from your descriptions.
09/09/11
NIce job, I liked the 'screenplay' version of a story with a powerful message at the exit. Powerful, God bless~
09/12/11
This would be a wonderful skit to put on at churchshort but with vivid and powerful message! Enjoyed!
This is really clever. Congratulations for ranking 9th in Masters and 17th overall.