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A very interesting and keep-you-on-the-edge-of-your-seat story. The worm part was gross, but I like the way the boys escaped.
Very good descriptions. Kind of gross, but that's what makes it a good story!
Nice job. Thank you.
Warning--do not read this before dinner!
Lots of unpleasant imagery throughout this adventurous piece which lends itself to young boyish shennanagins. So glad John and the other boys stood up to the bully, Paul.
What a story - you can't get much more 'outlandish' than that! Brilliantly and vividly told - with fantastic descriptions. You had me on the edge of my seat wondering what was going to happen.
(PS: I wonder if I can face spaghetti ever again!!)