The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/11
I love the use of dialogue to take us back in time. The ending was perfect!
05/15/11
Clever and fun - love the end especially. Fun dialogue!
05/17/11
Your descriptions and dialogue draw the reader into a world that is foreign to us yet you still managed to make us feel privy to the moment. Great writing!
05/19/11
And so begins this novel....
Congratulations on your EC! Loved the twist at the end!
I love to read your stories...AND see your name in lights! This is charming.
05/19/11
Ha ha! I loved the "subtle boldness" displayed here. This is filled with charm, adorable characters, and fun! Super congrats on your Editor's Choice award!!
05/19/11
Delightful story. I think I saw Miss Scarlett O'Hara lurking in the trees! Great job! Congrats on your placement! God bless!