The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - what wonderful imagery! I had to read through this a couple of times, but I'm pretty sure I understand now what this was about. I really got into the vernacular of your MC, too - very appealing! Good job!
There's a fiendish quality to your narrator and his end (at the end) seemed fitting and justified. :) Your style and skill make this shine. I love all your Biblical allusions, from "seeds sown on the path" to the references of the cross.