The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting take on the topic. I've even heard someone saying that gravity doesn't exist. Thank you.
A bump in the flow for me came with this sentence: The widow of a Navy man spoke emotionally of this. I expected there to be a quote from her. And I think it wouldve been okay to refer by name to those you quoted within the article rather than footnote them. Overall I think its a well-written article. Thank you for sharing it with us.