The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so well-written. Expertly so. I could go on about the perfection of it without getting into the message. But, I won't. This story has really touched me deeply. Just wonderful through and through.

Absolutely super!
No more to be said!
A novel, fresh approach that stimulates our conscience. I love how you juxtapose the two cultures and draw us in with well chosen and finely crafted prose. Masterfully done.
Your contrast, written excellently of our greed and their need, smites the conscience.
Brilliant, heart-wrenching and so convicting. What an amazing bond between the two of you. I'd love to know if you are planning to meet her one day.
Powerfully written! I hope this gets wide spread attention as it deserves! Thank you.
Congratulations on placing 11th in Masters and 14th overall.