The Official Writing Challenge
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You draw quite a word picture of all the places and events - I can see it in my mind. It's like taking a train ride through history and fits perfectly with the topic.

This piece seems to set the stage for a longer story.

The only thing I could have wished for was a little more dialogue. And yet that may not be what your particular audience is looking for.

Very nice descriptions. Country living used to be untouched by current issues in the rest of the U.S. but not so now. I still like the quiet, though.