The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this presentation of words in poetic fashion. I also appreciated you didn't try to explain. An enjoyable read; a piece of art I enjoyed. Thank you. I am actually going to copy this for futhr study. I like your work here.
lovely poem--I especially liked the line "in eternal wait for the coming hallelujahs."
I enjoyed this SO much. The form was perfect for the content, which was rich and evocative. I agree; this is a keeper, to be read again and again. Its message is powerful.
Congratulations on writing such an inspirational winner.
Very vivid imagery. I felt like I could see and feel the old cathedrals.

Congratulations on your placement!
Excellent poem! I really like your solemn tone, which makes the poem feel like a Gregorian chant. Congratulations on your win!
Congratulations! A well-deserved win! This is beautiful and haunting.
Congratulations Jim on your well deserved win. Such wonderful descriptive writing and a great rhythm to this.
Beautiful work. Super congrats on your Editor's Choice award!
Well done! I loved it.
Wow! Powerful poem. I like the repetition and the memory the poem evokes. I think I'm going to bookmark it for my files.

Congratulations on your 1st place award.
Moving and powerful. Excellent! Well deserved first place!
Very, very nice. Beautifully done.
Huge congratulations, Jim!!!!
Beautifully written. Congrats on your win. :)
Congrats on EC. I liked it from the git go. Very impressive.
I love the gentle rhythm and the internal rhymes - they carried me along and wouldn't let me stop reading. Stunningly beautiful.
Jim, I wanted to pop in here and also congratulate you on your win. The judges thought it was an exquisite piece of writing, and as one said, the last stanza gave her shivers. Exactly the sort of response you want to evoke through your words. Well done on this very though provoking poem (and our prayers are with you).

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Jim, there is something quaint and nostalgic about your poetry. It is calming yet profound, reflecting I'm sure the soul of the one who penned the lines. Congratulations on your win of this lovely poem.
Very nice job of evoking the historicity/antiquity of our faith through your language usage. Congratulations!