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01/27/11
This was so touching...sad, yet beautiful. I'm glad God blessed her in the end.
01/27/11
This was both terribly sad and wonderfully joyous. Nicely written
01/28/11
So touching. Good writing.
01/31/11
How sad...but also how full of hope at the end. I have been there so I could empathise with your MC.
Tender story. Thanks for writing.
02/01/11
Terrible, yet excellent. Your one-sentence lines were the perfect way to carry the story.
02/01/11
I'm so thankful for caring nurses. Thanks for sharing this story.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!
I always used to say I liked working OB because it was the happiest place in the hospital, however when it's sad, it's the saddest. But I was always thankful I could be there and help just a little.