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Sweet, sweet story! I enjoyed this one!
So sweet! What a wonderful surprise she had. Was beginning to wonder how he did it with it being '61, but you fixed it right up. Delightful
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
Whew! Was so glad it was a good ending. You had me worried a minute. Good writing skills to tamper with my emotions like that. Enjoyed your story.
I just love a happy, surprise ending. This one made me smile. Beautifully done!
This gave me chillbumps and a big lump in my throat. (You must have done a good job with your story!)
Loved this! But it is also true that I am a sucker for a good happy ending with returning military personnel! Now my grandson is joining up.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!
Lynn, I'm going to feature this on the Front Page Showcase for the week of December 26. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!