The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm speechless!
This is masterful--truly moving. I can almost hear the melody.
Beautiful and agonizing. I love the descriptive imagery. This is absolutely lovely.
I was moved by the longing in this richly crafted poem. You floated my soul aloft as I read. This is truly gorgeous!
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one! Unbelievable!
Oh, if those days were not so distant and far in between, how much more at peace we'd all be.
Wonderful job
This is so moving, I really loved it. I so hope it is not true although if it is then I know God will comfort you. My only comment, and I am really sorry to say this, but I wasn't sure how on-topic it was. I still loved it though. Extremely moving.
this is so........ poetic :-) the words are like a symphony and wash over me to savour... like the early morning by the shore taking in the wonder of Gods amazing world...
So incredible. Can't add anything else!
Grace with warmth adorned
Soaring high in your embrace
A chance to truly heal.

This is a wonderful picture of healing and the supernatural love and joy that we find in Jesus. He raises us above the tragedies in life.

Super congratulations on your two second place wins! Don't ever stop writing that beautiful poetry. ;)

Henry, congratulations on your Editor's Choice award... this is truly beautiful!
Lyrical and lovely! Congratulations on this beautifully written piece and on your highly deserved EC!
Henry, this is really beautiful! I love the ending; it is the perfect way to finish your poem. I love poems that are sad but end with a note of hope!
Congratulations on your EC, too!
Great job, Henry! Enjoyed your use of words. Congratulations to you!
Congrats Henry, great job!
The occasional smile...the occasional kiss...I get the "blue moon" angle. Oh my, oh my, oh my - I don't know what else to say. This hauntingly beautiful poem has left me speechless. Congrats on your win. Well deserved, for sure.