The Official Writing Challenge
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I want to hear more! What a cliff hanger. I read it too fast the first time and missed some parts of the story, but then it all fit together.

Great story!
Definitely going to want to read the whoooooole story now! Great writing!
I love this and the excerpts I've been blessed enough to read. I can't wait to read the whole book. You're doing a great job. You've produced conflict early on and I'm rooting for the two youngsters. You really drew me into the story.
It looks like it's going to be a powerhouse of a novel. Keep it coming.
Some really good stuff in the rest of the Levels, but you know you're in Masters when you begin with this story. Eureka!!
This book will be a great page-turner. Terrific sense of suspense.
Hurry up with the book.. I wanna see what happens. ;-)
This was lots of fun to read. Great job! :)
Love the characters! Can't to read the novel!
:-) You are a master of writing!