The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a good beginning to what could be a very interesting and intriguing story. I found myself wanting more clues to what was going on. Where was the MC? Why was she in the woods in the first place? What was the time period? I think if you'd had more words to work with, I would have found those things answered in short order.

Good writing!
Great beginning. The ending was somewhat weak. I like the created way you handled the "face to face" aspect of the topic.
Oops! I mean the "creative" way....
Ooh I want to know so much more!! You drew me into your story and I can't wait to read more of it.
Good introduction to your NaNo project. It left me wanting to know more!
So many questions:) Guess you have a great setup for Nano now. Good job!
I read this several times to see if I could get who, what, where. But, I must admit I don't quite know what is happening. A tease for sure.

Your descriptive introduction drew me in. I'd like to know more...